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@@ -145,17 +145,19 @@ To search for the \verb|fat| module:
 sudo lsmod | grep fat
 \end{codebash}
 
-\subsection{Do I need to download and compile the kernel?}
+\subsection{Is there a need to download and compile the kernel?}
 \label{sec:buildkernel}
-For the purposes of following this guide you don't necessarily need to do that.
-However, it would be wise to run the examples within a test distribution running on a virtual machine in order to avoid any possibility of messing up your system.
+To effectively follow this guide, there is no obligatory requirement for performing such actions.
+Nonetheless, a prudent approach involves executing the examples within a test distribution on a virtual machine,
+thus mitigating any potential risk of disrupting the system.
 
 \subsection{Before We Begin}
 \label{sec:preparation}
-Before we delve into code, there are a few issues we need to cover.
-Everyone's system is different and everyone has their own groove.
-Getting your first "hello world" program to compile and load correctly can sometimes be a trick.
-Rest assured, after you get over the initial hurdle of doing it for the first time, it will be smooth sailing thereafter.
+Before delving into code, certain matters require attention.
+Variances exist among individuals' systems, and distinct personal approaches are evident.
+The achievement of successful compilation and loading of the inaugural ``hello world'' program may,
+at times, present challenges.
+It is reassuring to note that overcoming the initial obstacle in the first attempt paves the way for subsequent endeavors to proceed seamlessly.
 
 \begin{enumerate}
   \item Modversioning.